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Rules:
1) Be honest with your answers. Unless you're honest; you're not going to know whether or not your character is a Sue.

That's the only rule. There will be lots of questions to be answered which all have their own little category. Afterwards, add all the points that you earned from each question and check out your result. This was not meant to offend anyone so I apologize if you're offended. This was meant to help people. Anyways, feel free to add this into your journal and have fun answering the questions.

Name:

What is the name of your character?

Leeandra Roteorn
Margay Lerush
Salise Medazoa
Caral Lerush

Does your character's name have some kind of special meaning? [2 points if yes]

Leeandra: Nope, I saw the name Cassandra then I thought of Leenna. So I combined the names to Leeandra.
Margay: A margay is a cat
Salise: Hatora is a saber tooth-tiger and their species is Smilodon Fatails. Same thing with Leeandra’s, I combined the names ‘S’ + ‘ails’ (from Smilodn and fatails) and ‘e’ = Salise. I switched a few letters and added ‘e’.
Caral: Her name was a typo. Like Margay’s, I wanted to give Caral a cat’s name. I was thinking of naming her ‘Serval’ but that sounded like a boy’s name. So I decided to name her ‘Caracal’ bur when I entered her name I wrote C-A-R-A-L then I missed the second C. I couldn’t fix it so her name stayed as Caral.


Fandom:

What is/are the main fandom(s) your character is in? [3 points if in more then 1]

All four: Just Naruto.

Appearance:

Is your character unusually attractive? [3 points]

Leeandra: She has red hair and shows off skin.
Margay: She’s cute when she blushes but, sorry boys, she’s taken.
Salise: Not much.
Caral: None, unless you like wonderment.


Does your character have some type of unusual characteristic? (ie. Cat ears, cat tail, unusual eye color, Unusual hair colors [firey red, blue, white, green, rainbow, purple and pink all count]) [4 points. 5 extra for Cat features if the character is in anime fandom]

Leeandra: She grows feathers on her back and she has red hair.
Margay: Her eyes turn into snake eyes and she can shed her skin.
Salise: She has silver hair.
Caral: She is an unusual characteristic!


Does your character's clothing resemble any canon character's? [2 points]


Leeandra: Nope
Margay: Not at first but around 15 her boyfriend gave her clothes similiar to his.
Salise: No.
Caral: She has a cloak like an ANBU


Does your character have animal characteristics? [Bat wings, animal ears, animalistic body etc..] [2 points]


Leeandra: I already said the feathers, so that shouldn’t count
Margay: Same with Leeandra, already said so it shouldn’t count
Salise: Nope, only during the center of the year.
Caral: Confusing to answer.


Race/powers:

Is your character from a place that the fandom doesn't take place in? [3 points]

Leeandra and Lerush sisters: Yes, Hitotoki.
Salise: No, she is from Konoha.


Is your character a demon? [3 points]

All four: No

Is your character related to a demon? [2 points]
Leeandra, Margay and Salise: No, 100% human.
Caral: Related? No but not human at all.



Is your character related to a supreme being? (ie, god/goddess, Satan, angels etc..) [6 points]

Leeandra and Salise: Np, 100% normal like that.
Lerush sisters: Villagers think they are related to the 1st Kouinkage but I don’t think that makes her a supreme being.



Is your character a supreme being? (Same as above) [6 points]

Leeandra and Margay and Salise: Nope, they are humans.
Caral: Very hard to explain what is under her cloak.



Does your character practice witch craft? [2 points]

Leeandra: She gives Margay feathers for potions.
Margay: Do potions count?
Salise: She doesn’t believe in hocus-pocus
Caral: Hard to say.



Can your character change form? [2 points]
All four: Yes


Affair with canons:

Is your character in love with a canon?

Leeandra: She chooses not to love any more.
Margay: Sabaku no Kankuro.
Salise: She says she can’t fall in love.
Caral: With her problem, love doesn’t seem to be easy.


If so: who?

Leeandra: Not kiba
Margay: I just said Kankuro who calls her Lushes! CX
Salise: A childhood friend.
Caral: Ironically, her sister’s boyfriend’s younger brother.


Are they romantically involved? [4 points]

Leeandra: Kiba confessed in a way which helped eased Leeandra’s pain but not really.
Margay: Nearly all the time. Such a pleasing sight. Awww ^///^
Salise: Not even.
Caral: No.



Do they end up having kids? [4 points]

Leeandra: Kiba? No!!!
Margay: Yes, three young children, who are always in trouble.
Salise: Two children that have a bit of a hard time fitting in.
Caral: Only one but the child had to be given to Margay and Kankuro. She thought they were her parents.



Did they get married? [2 points]

Leeandra: God forbid Kiba!!
Margay: Yes, very romantic proposal if I might added ;) Her names changes to Areno no Margay.
Salise: They almost didn’t.
Caral: No.



Do they have flaws in their relationship? [Not worth any points]

Leeandra: She hates Kiba!
Margay: Suspicions of cheating.
Salise: Not in a relationship.
Caral: It’s complex.

Are there other canons who lust over your character? [4 points. Extra 3 if more then one canon lusts after your character]

Leeandra: Kiba didn’t ‘lust’ over her, he just started to like a bit more then a friend would.
Salise and Lerush sisters: Never.


Is your character related to any of the canons by blood? [2 points]

Leeandra: Like the Sharigan, her Gekkia Genkia was made from the Hyuga clan.
Salise and Lerush sisters: No.


Is your character in love with more then one canon? [2 points]

All four: No.

Has your character had past romantic relationships with other canons? [7 points]

All four: No

Does your character hate any of the canon characters and wishes to hurt/kill them? [6 points]

Leeandra: Kiba and all Inuzukas.
Margay: She thinks hate is an awful emotion.
Salise: No, not really.
Caral: Not any one canon.



History:

Has your character ever been involved with prostitution/drugs/child abuse/rape? [4 points]

All four: No.

Has your character had any tragedy in her past? [5 points]

Leeandra: She had her heart broken, I guess that’s tragic.
Margay: Nothing more then a nightmare.
Salise: She is force to share pain.
Caral: Yes.

Total:

Leeandra: 19
Margay: 21
Salise: 21
Caral: 20


Results:

All four: I think I miscounted but over all they are well balance.

56-88= Uber sue; I'm sorry but your character is a total sue. Try not to make your character too powerful or too attractive. Maybe give your character some flaws and you can be sure to have an OC. Keep on developing your character; he/she has a lot potential.
41-55= Mary Sue. Your character is rough around the edges but with a little more polishing then your character will become a loveable OC. Maybe either give your character more or less flaws. Try to make them a bit more believable and you will have an OC.
29-40= You have a very well balanced character. Good job on having a true OC.
20 and under= Anti sue. Why are you taking this?
If you have an Oc, take this test to improve if they are Mary Sues.

Mary Sues are (very) obsessed fangirls (or fanboys) who put themsevles in an anime to pair themsevles up with a character. The creator always makes the Mary Sue so perfect for the character to make others believe that they belong together. When poeple start to sopport a Mary Sue then the creator will be much encuraged to draw/write more of them x offical. You can spot the creator of a Mary Sue if you seee their comment saying "He/She is MINE!!! You can't have him/her!!!" Something along those lines.

I, for one, have never seen a fanboy before and hope to never have either.

I don't not like Sues, I like well written OC's.

I might disable comments if a war starts to begin
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SniperInBlack's avatar
Oh lawd, lowest was 8 pts for my Kane, highest was possibly 15 for Hauka... Heheh :katana: