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Explantion
Panel 1: Caral senses an arrival, calling it an interferance.

Panel 2: Lori can't sense it as the dragon puppet lands far behind her

Panel 3: Not thinking of anything but Lori's safety, Shino runs to her by the dragon puppet's teeth. He runs so fast hios hood is falling off.

Panel 4: Kankuro can tell about Shino's trouble and needs to stop him. Margay is behind him and holding his waist. I know she was on the far back, which was not smart to do since she can sense Caral. so it's much, MUCH better if she's behind Kankuro so she can tell him wherer to go. Also holding on someone's waist gives you a much better grip then their shoulders. and Margay has short hair not long down her back.

Panel 5: Margay stands in their way. She needs to tell the two boys something important

Panel 6: While Margay tried to talk, Baki and Temari got off the dragon puppet and they have to know what she has to say. Unknowingly, Caral appears behind them

Panel 7/8/9: Caral grabs both their shoulders and repeats what she said.

Panel 10: That same green thing shows up again.

Panel 11: It quivkly wrapps Margay, Kankuro and Shino together before Margay could talk. The bg is the dragon puppet's mouth.


Panel 12: All six of them disappear

Panel 13: lori has become a bit use to seeing people disappering, so she's not so surprise.

Panel 14: Caral encases the tiny dragon scoll in ice. No, she's not destorying it. She explains why she is encasing it in ice

Panel 15: Lori hears her voice behind her

Panel 16/17: The ice along with the scroll begin to fade like mist.

Panel 18: Now that, surprises Lori

Panel 19: Since Lori has been lax to answer the "Live or Die" question, Caral asks again

Panel 20: Shino reaches out for Lori, trying to get what just happened.

Panel 21: Margay fears because her own sister took her with Kankuro and Shino to the Ligthening country

Panel 22/23: Kankuro knows Margay has info on Caral. He asks since he doesn't want to be left in the dark.

Panel 24: Margay agrees and begins the flashback
Now i know no one likes flashbacks but this one is actually important, so no crying!!

Panel 25/26: Seddu is Margay's It and then we see something greenish

Panel 27: Kankuro interupts. 3 years ago Gaara did fight Caral. He looks so amazed becuse Caral used Passing Heal on him.

Panel 28/29: Caral's potion that she always carries with her and what will happen with Caral doesnt take the medicine.

Panel 30: Still in flash back. Margay still talking

Panel 31: Margay reveals that Caral might release her anger on Lori after keeping it inside for so long

Panel 32: Bottle cracking, ready to break open.

Panel 33: The unleash.

Panel 34: Yes, that's Lori dead but no, she not really dead. It's just an imangintion of what might happen to her understand?

Panel 35: Kankuro conclues that if he had killed Lori when they had their match then none of this would have happened.

Panel 36: Thinking Kankuro had lost his mind, Shino knocks some sense into him, literally.

Panel 37 adn 38: They have an argument about right/wrong.

Panel 39: Shino heads off as Kankuro suffers little pain from his strike.

Panel 40: The puppeteer launches chakra strings to stop the Aburame.

Panel 41: Shino struggles with the strings.

Panel 42: Kankuro tightens his grip, concered only about the bug ninja with a death wish.

Penal 43: Shino shows he doesn't care what happens to him if he saves Lori.

Panel 44: Enraged by the Aburame's stubborness, Kankuro attempts to explain that it would be foolish to try and stop Caral. They did fight her and lost their matches.

Panel 45: Sadden by the truth, Shino sighs, understanding.

Panel 46 and 47: Knowing the Aburame has calmed down, Kankuro breaks his strings. He imforms that Shino should just forget that Lori-Chan was ever alive, to forget that they met her. To Kankuro, Lori's dead.

Panel 48: The lens shine while Shino states his reason why he won't go after the girl he wants to save.

Panel 49: Not interested but curious what could be Shino's reason, Kankuro gives him his attension.

Panel 50: Because HE BELIEVES in Lori!

Panel 51: Kankuro, for certain, doesn't have any hope in the Midori-Ryu at all. He has given up and nothing will change his mind.

Panel 52: We find Temari confused but not by herself.

Panel 53: She calls out to her sensie.

Panel 54: Not answering, Baki gazes at something.

Panel 55: It's the water symbol.

Where are they? :pointr: [link]

So, :iconmaster-kankuro: I'm done!! :boogie:

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:iconkankuro4ever:
Great end to the comic, but I don't understand why Kankuro is being very cold about Lori when Kankuro is supposedly supposed to be good friends with her.

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you tiny little life forms. . .
you precious little life forms. . .
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:iconshikuroxkanno:
well ~Master-Kankuro and i have discuss about Lori and Kankuro's relationship. they don't have one. the kind they do have is like strangers.

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:iconkankuro4ever:
oh, that's sort of sad :(

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you precious little life forms. . .
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:iconshikuroxkanno:
well they only met once

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:iconkankuro4ever:
I meant because of what I read in MK's Bio on Lori

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you tiny little life forms. . .
you precious little life forms. . .
where are you?
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:iconshikuroxkanno:
no, no, no. if u read her "artie's comments" she said that it's different from our comic

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:iconkankuro4ever:
okay I just thought they'd be a bit warmer to each other and that Kankuro would care more, it confuses me that Shino is the one all concerned for her.

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:music:Life forms. . .
you tiny little life forms. . .
you precious little life forms. . .
where are you?
:music:
:iconshikuroxkanno:
nope wrong. kankuro doesn't. well Shino started to like her from the start when he entered in the comic. he gave lori the flower when she as in the hospital

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:iconmaster-kankuro:
Sob-sob--sniff-sniff.
WHY u let me suffer SOOO much???
After Kankuro´s intention to kill Lori-Chan u let him be soo heartless to even "get rid of her in his mind" in THAT hard, brutal and hateful way???
I´m gald that u let at least let Shino be so nice.
By WHY just Kankuro?????

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:iconshikuroxkanno:
shino's acting nice on his own.
well margay doesn't know lori so much, and she's more wooried about her sister.
and i wanted to end my comic with tameri and baki

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