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Explantion
Panel 1: Caral senses an arrival, calling it an interferance.

Panel 2: Lori can't sense it as the dragon puppet lands far behind her

Panel 3: Not thinking of anything but Lori's safety, Shino runs to her by the dragon puppet's teeth. He runs so fast hios hood is falling off.

Panel 4: Kankuro can tell about Shino's trouble and needs to stop him. Margay is behind him and holding his waist. I know she was on the far back, which was not smart to do since she can sense Caral. so it's much, MUCH better if she's behind Kankuro so she can tell him wherer to go. Also holding on someone's waist gives you a much better grip then their shoulders. and Margay has short hair not long down her back.

Panel 5: Margay stands in their way. She needs to tell the two boys something important

Panel 6: While Margay tried to talk, Baki and Temari got off the dragon puppet and they have to know what she has to say. Unknowingly, Caral appears behind them

Panel 7/8/9: Caral grabs both their shoulders and repeats what she said.

Panel 10: That same green thing shows up again.

Panel 11: It quivkly wrapps Margay, Kankuro and Shino together before Margay could talk. The bg is the dragon puppet's mouth.


Panel 12: All six of them disappear

Panel 13: lori has become a bit use to seeing people disappering, so she's not so surprise.

Panel 14: Caral encases the tiny dragon scoll in ice. No, she's not destorying it. She explains why she is encasing it in ice

Panel 15: Lori hears her voice behind her

Panel 16/17: The ice along with the scroll begin to fade like mist.

Panel 18: Now that, surprises Lori

Panel 19: Since Lori has been lax to answer the "Live or Die" question, Caral asks again

Panel 20: Shino reaches out for Lori, trying to get what just happened.

Panel 21: Margay fears because her own sister took her with Kankuro and Shino to the Ligthening country

Panel 22/23: Kankuro knows Margay has info on Caral. He asks since he doesn't want to be left in the dark.

Panel 24: Margay agrees and begins the flashback
Now i know no one likes flashbacks but this one is actually important, so no crying!!

Panel 25/26: Seddu is Margay's It and then we see something greenish

Panel 27: Kankuro interupts. 3 years ago Gaara did fight Caral. He looks so amazed becuse Caral used Passing Heal on him.

Panel 28/29: Caral's potion that she always carries with her and what will happen with Caral doesnt take the medicine.

Panel 30: Still in flash back. Margay still talking

Panel 31: Margay reveals that Caral might release her anger on Lori after keeping it inside for so long

Panel 32: Bottle cracking, ready to break open.

Panel 33: The unleash.

Panel 34: Yes, that's Lori dead but no, she not really dead. It's just an imangintion of what might happen to her understand?

Panel 35: Kankuro conclues that if he had killed Lori when they had their match then none of this would have happened.

Panel 36: Thinking Kankuro had lost his mind, Shino knocks some sense into him, literally.

Panel 37 adn 38: They have an argument about right/wrong.

Panel 39: Shino heads off as Kankuro suffers little pain from his strike.

Panel 40: The puppeteer launches chakra strings to stop the Aburame.

Panel 41: Shino struggles with the strings.

Panel 42: Kankuro tightens his grip, concered only about the bug ninja with a death wish.

Penal 43: Shino shows he doesn't care what happens to him if he saves Lori.

Panel 44: Enraged by the Aburame's stubborness, Kankuro attempts to explain that it would be foolish to try and stop Caral. They did fight her and lost their matches.

Panel 45: Sadden by the truth, Shino sighs, understanding.

Panel 46 and 47: Knowing the Aburame has calmed down, Kankuro breaks his strings. He imforms that Shino should just forget that Lori-Chan was ever alive, to forget that they met her. To Kankuro, Lori's dead.

Panel 48: The lens shine while Shino states his reason why he won't go after the girl he wants to save.

Panel 49: Not interested but curious what could be Shino's reason, Kankuro gives him his attension.

Panel 50: Because HE BELIEVES in Lori!

Panel 51: Kankuro, for certain, doesn't have any hope in the Midori-Ryu at all. He has given up and nothing will change his mind.

Panel 52: We find Temari confused but not by herself.

Panel 53: She calls out to her sensie.

Panel 54: Not answering, Baki gazes at something.

Panel 55: It's the water symbol.

Where are they? :pointr: [link]

So, :iconmaster-kankuro: I'm done!! :boogie:

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Gaara looks great o.o

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I KNEW IT!!!
"Kankuro knows his gir......friend has info on Caral. He asks since he doesn't want to be left in the dark."

Soo u already decidet that Margay is Kankuro´s girlfriend...not pretty fair...

And I don´t see agood end about this battle. I don´t want that ONE will be killed. Neither Lori-Chan (FOR SHURE) nor Carl. But I have that feeling, that u MIGHT want to let Caral kill Lori-Chan as long Caral lives. But I DON´T want that...so normally Lori-Chan must KILL her to survive...but I don´t want to do that TOO!!!
Not fair to have no options more, because u AWLWAYS change it for only Carals advatage...


But some positive words now. Your Gaara looks GREAT!!! :thumbsup:
But when didCaral fight agaginst him and WHO did won this battle?
"Margay reveals that Caral might release her anger on Lori after keeping it inside for so long"..why DOES Caral do that??? Lori-Chan did ANYTHINg bad...:sniff: And don´t tell me "only to test Lori-Chan"...

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thanku ^////^ our fav Kazekage should always look great!

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thankx much :hug:

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where do u see that? :giggle: i changed it don't worry. i was just tesing a bit

i have an idea on how this battle should end with everyone alive.

i don't changes things for caral's advantage, i keeping forgetting stuff about her

it says "3 years ago" since our comic is taking place in Shipuuned. remember? if u read "Spirit Info" then you know why she has anger and haterd. In the end, the doctor didn’t and that child, known as Caral, lived in a world of incapable to forgive. She can't forgive what Fuuin Iki did to her so she has been hating herself

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He always looks great and hot and smart and hot.... And hot! xD >-< :drool:

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:giggle: Pretty provocative my dear huh??? ;=
And WOOT an idea how that battle can end with EVERYONE alive?? =D
Maybe but ONLY maybe u can tell me a BIT, so I can better work toward that idea.
I altho though of a "discussion" via notes, where we can talk about BOTH imaginations and whishes, how this story can be. So I hope taht we BOTH are more and more pleasand. Okay???

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